ext_114006 ([identity profile] et-tu-lj.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] lokifan 2008-09-21 10:22 pm (UTC)

This is wonderful! The progression is just right and I like how the alternating viewpoints don't become apparent until the end. Haikus are not often used so well. Great job!
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