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lokifan ([personal profile] lokifan) wrote2009-08-16 09:37 pm
Entry tags:

Training

Title: Training
Word count: 100
Characters/pairings: Angelus, Spike
Rating PG
Disclaimer: The boys belong to Joss, even though I’m often much nicer to them than he is.
Author’s Notes: This was written for [profile] open_on_sunday’s current prompt, novice.


Spike fell back against the wall, away from the stake.

He’d gone looking for Watchers once they got back to London. Angelus had spoken scornfully of men who never fought themselves.

Angelus had been wrong.

The man rushed forward; Spike spun, slammed him against brick, and bit down.

He’d won. Just.

Angelus’ disgusted voice hit him; he turned, and saw his sire, demon-faced and displeased.

“Still a novice at subduing easy prey, boy? You’re a disgrace to the bloodline!”

Spike scowled and said nothing. When the practice paid off – when Spike killed a Slayer – Angelus would be proud of him.


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[identity profile] leni-ba.livejournal.com 2009-08-17 12:04 am (UTC)(link)
Still in love with your icon. XD

And sweet drabble! Love the mix of Spike's first steps and the vampire he'd become. Nobody can say that when the boy had something in mind he didn't go after it wholeheartedly. ;)

[identity profile] rebcake.livejournal.com 2009-08-17 12:53 am (UTC)(link)
Excellent. Angelus always sold Spike short, and Spike was tenacious enough to prove him wrong, in so many ways. Liam was more like his dad than he ever dreamed.

[identity profile] jen-nsync-landl.livejournal.com 2009-08-17 02:02 am (UTC)(link)
Good stuff. Perfectly in keeping with what we know about Spike's desire to impress Angelus and, on a certain level, his resentment of having to. Well done!

[identity profile] kudagirl.livejournal.com 2009-08-17 11:52 am (UTC)(link)
This is why William became Spike. He had to prove himself. William even as a vampire wasn't even as bad as Liam. Being under Angelus' control pressured William into doing more and more to earn approval. Angelus did create Spike, the Slayer of Slayers.

[identity profile] all-choseny.livejournal.com 2009-08-17 10:33 pm (UTC)(link)
The relationship between Spike and Angelus was always an interesting one. He played the disappointed father well. I think he was just a wee bit jealous, and Spike always felt he had something to prove. Funny, in the end, Spike became the better vampire.
Edited 2009-08-17 22:33 (UTC)

[identity profile] urania-calliope.livejournal.com 2009-08-17 10:55 pm (UTC)(link)
Always trying to make daddy proud.

Well done!

[identity profile] zoesmith.livejournal.com 2009-08-24 01:16 am (UTC)(link)
Great drabble hun! You really captured young Spike!

xxx