Whoa, that was *awesome*. I loved your Percy here, not cowed at all and still retaining a healthy bit of passive aggression for Arthur in particular.
And omg, that last scene with Draco!!! So wrong, so hot. I usually make my escape when it comes to piercings or tattoos, but the nipple rings were awesome here - as was Percy's inability not to abuse them. And guh, Draco's reaction... spectacular. This in particular, for sheer shiny writing:
Another tug on the piercing defiling that aristocratic body, watching the arch of the slim back, the growing, humiliated flush.
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Date: 2009-12-14 10:29 pm (UTC)And omg, that last scene with Draco!!! So wrong, so hot. I usually make my escape when it comes to piercings or tattoos, but the nipple rings were awesome here - as was Percy's inability not to abuse them. And guh, Draco's reaction... spectacular. This in particular, for sheer shiny writing:
Another tug on the piercing defiling that aristocratic body, watching the arch of the slim back, the growing, humiliated flush.
Brilliant, ominous exit line too :).
Loved it, you marvel!